F.+Midterm+essay

 Sharon Chow

The reason I want my teacher to pass me is because I want to show that I have learned something, improved, and put forth an effort. I will be happier and easier to teach.

I know how to use comma rules because before I did not know how to put commas in the right places. I used to put spaces before punctuations, but now I do not because I understand why I cannot do that. I do not use contractions in formal essays because it is too informal. I now know how to put my ideas together instead of spreading it out. I actually can do it if I put an effort

I have improved by putting in commas in the right places more then I did before. I use fewer contractions because I think it is way too informal. I write less fragment sentences because if I write it, it does not make sense. This is why I have improved.

I write more essays now to keep me on track. I practice a lot more because I used to fail badly on essays. I tend to spend more time on writing because it is more fun and it is much easier. I have learned to turn my work in because when I did not I would get in so much trouble. I have learned to get better grades. I have put in more effort.

After reading this essay, I hope you would give me a C because of all the things I have done to improve put forth an effort and actually did it too. Before I would have a lot of trouble writing but now I have done my best and will do more and write more